PIECES OF ME - Dear You #3
Dear you,
What happened?
You were feisty
You were smart
You were funny
You were lively
You were strong
You were full of energy
You were ambitious
You were brave
You were happy
But it changed..
You're now spiritless
You're now unfocused
You're now unamusing
You're now quiet
You're now weak
You're now inactive
You're now lethargic
You're now afraid
You're now miserable
Don't worry...
One day you'll be enthusiastic again
One day you'll be brilliant again
One day you'll be jolly again
One day you'll be vigorous again
One day you'll be tenacious again
One day you'll be exuberant again
One day you'll be determined again
One day you'll be courageous again
One day you'll be happy again
One day.
Love,
What happened?
You were feisty
You were smart
You were funny
You were lively
You were strong
You were full of energy
You were ambitious
You were brave
You were happy
But it changed..
You're now spiritless
You're now unfocused
You're now unamusing
You're now quiet
You're now weak
You're now inactive
You're now lethargic
You're now afraid
You're now miserable
Don't worry...
One day you'll be enthusiastic again
One day you'll be brilliant again
One day you'll be jolly again
One day you'll be vigorous again
One day you'll be tenacious again
One day you'll be exuberant again
One day you'll be determined again
One day you'll be courageous again
One day you'll be happy again
One day.
Love,
Great write-up.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI love to read poems every now and then and I love yours. Keep on writing! xx
ReplyDeleteThanks! I love writing them too.
DeleteGreat poem. I love it!
ReplyDeleteJael
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Thank you!
DeleteWho is the you? Is it me? OMG! Dan
ReplyDeleteLOL hahaha! You is anyone who feels that they're lost and the poem is a message to them that one day things will be okay.
DeleteI've been that stage before, gambateh, hope you will be okay soon :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis could possibly be a reminder note to self. Life is like a roller coaster. Love yourself and be strong.
ReplyDeleteyes. a reminder that we may experience downfall, but one day everything will be okay
DeleteYes. I hope one day we will all realize that all of us worth something.
ReplyDeleteI agree
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ReplyDeleteYeah... but
ReplyDeleteI am still lively
I am still strong
I am still full of energy
But i am ambitious
I am still brave
I am still happy
lovely.
good for you :)
DeleteThanks for the write up! I remember I used to write when I am still in school time.
ReplyDeleteyou're welcome! I used to write all the time too when I was in school.
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